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The words "man" and "again" are similar enough for the rhyme to work. ^_^ I'm all for slant rhyme, but those two seemed a little too far apart. I'll think ...

Typing and waiting: Today, essay and poem. So many more years.

It was a dark and stormy night when Fluffnugget the dog escaped into the uncaring, harsh world.

Freezing cold outside We didn't get a snowday The air, dry and harsh.

*wants to live in London very badly* I love Europe. From afar. You get points for making posts, depending on how long they are, and you can also spend points ...

All winter we’ve watched this journey Who is "we"? She unbuttons, lets her braid dangle The way this is phrased makes it sound like the braid dangling is a result ...

I hate the title too. Unfortunately, "Teacher in the Snow" makes me think of this poem that my friend wrote about a chorus song with violins in the snow... The ...

Tongue.

Granted, but now he's so lax with the orchestra that everyone drops the instruments, runs off, and gets drunk. And then you're in big trouble. I wish the school would ...

Jimmy makes an excellent point! An ending like that would be much less expected and therefore, more effective. "Before you insult someone, you should walk a mile in his shoes. ...

Chandni makes an excellent point. Rome and Romania are hardly the same thing.

I'm afraid adding structure in this instance would be more like adding a $30 steak to a plateful of ketchup. Best, Trident Did Trident just pull a Brad? Anyway, I ...

This is not of ee cummings quality, if that's what you were aiming for. This seems to be some sort of strange attempt at experimental poetry that has lost me ...

The best ideas often come when I'm doing homework or when I'm in the shower. It's a little easier to open up a Word document and type or write on ...

That may have been the shortest introductory post I've ever read. Welcome! Colleen