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  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Dying Breed

    I'd say "random list of phrases" pretty much sums up this poem. The phrases are choppy, disjointed, abstract, sometimes cliche. I don't even know what this is about! It jumps ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: In-Between

    The point behind the meaning...what? That people are shallow? If you're intending that we get something else, then it seems this poem has failed to get it across. And isn't ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Abortion

    But that doesn't mean we should have laws allowing them to do it legally, even if it is safer. That's like saying that because stealing might be potentially dangerous for ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish

    Injured, eh? It's the bowling team. :lol: Anyway, granted, but it's a mean llama that spits. I wish the sewing machine worked.

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Nic(k)otine

    I suppose cables might bring up the image of machinery, something stripped down to its barest naked parts. Still, that whole stanza is just full of cluttered metaphors, so I ...

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: In-Between

    We have Nathaniel Hawthorne to be obscure, and while dodgey terms have their place in the world, a simple affirmation, clear-cut, can also have its value. Obscure and subtle are ...

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Artisan is Dead

    Ooh, very creepy, very enjoyable. The one thing I don't get...did the woman kill him? Is she crazy? Or is she pretending? What? ...I feel like this is something extremely ...

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Nic(k)otine

    The title made me want to vomit. Word play is in no way justified here. I did like that the title tied in with the poem in terms of nicotine ...

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Two Funerals

    I rather liked this one; I think its strongest point was the imagery; I could really feel the sun and the cold. Those situations were described really well. It seems, ...

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Life by Haiku

    It's just too loud here: the heater humming but no heat is coming out.

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish

    Granted, but now you can't eat because it's still raining. I wish my team could win Monday.

    Feb 9, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: God and war

    True, in some sense, but again, that's your personal opinion of God.

    Feb 8, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Abortion

    Whatever my personal opinion may be on what the Bible is or isn't, I think all people are entitled to whatever religious beliefs they want, so long as they don't ...

    Feb 8, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Boredom in Church

    *also sips tea* Biscuit? I'm not exactly sure what you're saying. Philosophy arises because people are looking for answers to life, the universe, and everything. For many, the answer is ...

    Feb 8, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism in schools

    Well, in my freshman biology class, our teacher mentioned a few different creation theories before beginning our Darwinian evolution unit: 1. God/other Supreme Being(s) dunnit. 2. Things in space (ast

    Feb 8, 2007


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