Cade

Do you have something I can weigh it with?

Flip.

Ha! This girl has the same name as me. I've never read anything with my name in it, and it is really bizarre. I want to know what she looks ...

Although this has some beautiful images and some very poignant statements, I couldn't hang on to it. This needs a situation, a place, something for the reader to firmly set ...

Granted, but it's my neighbor's insane calico killing machine and by the end of your first day with the kitty you require fifty-three stitches. I wish my senior friends weren't ...

I suppose anyone who's passionate about his work will get caught up in it, lion-trainer or not.

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I know what you mean with procrastination and not finishing long things. I think I'm a poet because I don't have the patience for anything ...

Well actually if you MUST know, I editted ambition because I realized that lack of puncuation just kind of ruins everything. Haha. Hey you learn something new every day. *high-five* ...

Granted, but now you're so awake your eyes pop out of your head and you severely injure yourself while bouncing off the walls. I wish I could get a job ...

This poem showed me that you are observant and able to describe things in detail. Good job on that. Just try not to write in that childish way, as saoirse ...

The end says that even if you have a path laid out for yourself, and all the necessary things to take, you are going nowhere if you have no destination. ...

*throttles Elizabeth* Why do you keep me guessing?! Mwahaha, I likes it with all its shiver-inducing creepiness. Another question: What is the significance of his occupation: artisan?

You punctuated "Ambition" in Dramatic Poetry. I liked that one. This piece does have punctuation. Six commas, one question mark, one hyphen, and four quotation marks, so yes, you have ...

*hugs this poem* I really liked this. It made me think of Lord of the Rings. Just a few things: Splashes of color..a minted Monet painting. The Monet reference seemed ...

No, it didn't make any sense. :( Again, it's all about how an individual sees God. Even if you believe God exists, there's always the question of what God intended ...