Cade

My English teacher is very good in terms of teaching. She's really funny and so efficient we can sometimes go off on some random tangent for most of class and ...

Orange.

Granted, but I eat all of them. I wish there was something good on TV.

This poem didn't make me feel anything. It didn't go anywhere. This was pure cliched teen angst. It simply lays out this situation: "Here I am standing in the bathroom, ...

Ah, my sentiments exactly. The first and third stanzas were strong in terms of feeling and tone. The second one, not so much. It was limp and kind of whiny, ...

Granted, but now it's hot. I wish I had some whipped cream.

I listen to nearly everything, sans rap and country, in most cases. But, its a very wide range of music. Oh, yes, I can second that! *hates country* Yay old ...

What happens if everyone decides for themselves what is right and wrong? After all, Hitler thought he was doing the right thing when he killed and persecuted the Jews. The ...

Granted, but it has so much sugar your teeth rot, and then you'll wish you'd had some nice milk instead. I wish I could get tickets to Spamalot for my ...

My birthday today. Sixteen but still shaking at heart. I'm missing you.

Ooh, rhyme. I don't really know what to say about rhythm and things, but I didn't see any major problems. I'm not very good with that technical rhythm stuff. :wink: ...

Cutting that last phrase off from the previous stanza really interrupted the flow as well as the pattern of not dividing sentences between stanzas (except between two and three, but ...

Punctuation, please! You don't have to capitalize the first letter of each line, but at least do the first letter of each sentence. This poem has listed a bunch of ...

It seemed like you were attempting to have this apple motif, but it was rather limp. What does the last stanza have to do with apples? What does anything in ...

Right, and you think that constructing your own beliefs is for the better, right? So do I. As a kid, I barely attended. I didn't know why I was there. ...