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Do whatever Clau tells you to do! I agree with her; I didn't really know what was going on here. Obviously this is the voice of some malevolent and deadly ...

Ha! Fantastic voice. As a poem, of course, it doesn't go too far, but it is humorous and really enjoyable to read. A nice break from angsty/cliche/pretentious poetry. Yay! The ...

I've heard this before, out of the mouths of my weird friends. If it's not yours, perhaps it should not be posted here? Really, write something of your own. Colleen

Rule #67: You must go to gym class. The Reason: It keeps you fit and teaches you important things about physical health so you don't end up morbidly obese. The ...

Happiness and love: for THEM. I am no sweetheart; I have no warm heart.

Granted, but you get into a fender-bender with some top-secret military helicopters, and you know what happens when random flying writers collide with the government... I wish bowling sectionals weren

As I said in the other thread, just because the general public thinks something is right or wrong doesn't mean that an act is absolutely right or wrong. Who decides ...

I'm glad it's over. Of course, everyone at school had their V-Day festivities today, so I still had to put up with it. The single red rose in the snow ...

Granted, but now it's so cheap they're all sold out before you get your hands on one. I wish I didn't have to sign off of YWS now and do ...

Dvorak has been embarrassingly performed in a nearly empty high school auditorium! I can now say more about this poem. The middle stanza is too long. I suggest dividing it ...

Hmm, I like this bread thing you've got going on, although the "bread of life" line was a little trite. Yeast, saltine crackers, Exodus, references to things being "thin". As ...

Well, some people believe that communicating with God outside of a church building is just as fine as communicating outside. If church isn't...*looks for the right word*...convenient...*still not the

Short is not necessarily bad. What it needs is a place to go, regardless of length. Dragging out the description will make it worse. Adding a stanza to give it ...

Here's the link from nytimes.com: It's about minting coins with dead presidents on them, and coming out with four each year, like the state quarters. The quarters have been successful, ...

Cool! :D I'm not the only person who gets my best ideas while in the shower... Well, you don't have much else to do in the shower, besides wash and ...