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I disagree. The presentation wasn't bad. The rhyme was fine. It was subtle. It doesn't have to be "mindblowing." The "O" at the beginning of each stanza was also fine ...

Granted, but it does itself poorly. Ha, that sounds awfully naughty. Sorry, I have a dirty mind. I blame my friends. I wish we weren't out of ice cream.

Very interesting. I liked the dialog you put in. It could use some spelling edits but otherwise I found this very affective. Good job. This poem has spelling errors? What? ...

I actually wasn't bothered by the tenses. I thought that the use of both future tense and present tense was very effective. (Or, perhaps I've just been doing too much ...

Although slitting one's wrists is cliche, I felt that you did a great job with it here. The speaker isn't talking about slitting-wrists-and-wallowing-in-depression like most wrist-slitting poems do. I

There's a great quote that says "Einstein would turn over in his grave; not only does God play dice, the dice are loaded!" That was the inspiration, pretty much. And ...

It wasn't so much about racism as about different-ism, no? This sounded a little too much like Stone Soup. As in, a little too obvious about the message. I thought ...

I also agree that the idea wasn't overly original, but it was well-expressed. Plus it is ridiculously hard nowadays to do something completely original as pretty much everything has been ...

I do like the new words. Yeah, if it needs explaining...well, explain it, actually, I'm curious. I do get a feeling out of this, but it's a little fuzzy. I ...

I think I might die having never been able to write out myself.

Granted, but your homework happened to be part of the clutter, and now it's gone and you have to explain to your teacher that you wished across the internet that ...

Well, really, if you put stuff up here, you're asking for criticism. People are only trying to help you improve your work. Poetry can be very therapeutic in terms of ...

I haven't seen a cinquain in years! I used to be obsessed with these when I was about eight. I made a poster teaching my parents how to write one. ...

blonde is right in that poetry is a good way to express yourself and get feelings down on paper, but was this successful for an audience? As Clau said, the ...

Agitation And Aggravation Why are they all capped? It made me think of AAA, which made me think of old people. After that, I didn't think much of anything, except ...