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Nice stuff! I'm not much for nature photography, so I think the street sign was the best. That one really struck me. Colleen

I'm not really connecting all of these things. Where do all these images go? What am I supposed to see? I wasn't able to visualize anything beyond the curtains. A ...

Granted, but your friend never wakes up. (Not meant in a death-ish way, just in a sleeping-in-so-long-you-miss-a-week-of-school way.) I wish the Rasputin biography I'm reading didn't have so many frag

Granted, but you never get a copy. I wish I had some chocolate chips. You just can't make chocolate chip cookies without them.

In terms of political correctness, he's an idiot. His words could've been meant as a compliment, but of course the public notices that they were complimenting an African-American. I do ...

I agree with you, Claudette! Structure is always a part of good poetry, regardless of rhyme and rhythm. A poem doesn't have to have rhyme or a set rhythm, but ...

Hours of friends I love but whimpering I trudged home and cried for my youth.

Granted, but now they conquer the Moon, which is frighteningly close. I wish I wasn't out of aspirin.

Well the actual story behind this is that it is what a person who's dying of a disease is saying to their partner. Basically they don't want their partner to ...

I think punctuation is the least of your worries. This is just...a bunch of phrases. Of course, it's strong in terms of tone and emotion, but as enjoyable poetry? Very, ...

This really interested me, but you've overdone it. Really badly overdone. It's blackened and burned. Fortunately, poetry is not like meat and the damage can be undone. I really, really ...

I really like the breaks where they are. In fact, I like this whole poem. It's got tone, feeling, and just sounds gorgeous. Wow. a series of mechanical bleeps and ...

I bet if you pricked Obama's skin, he would ooze Hallmark cliches. As I haven't and perhaps, couldn't say it more succinctly, I quote Brad. ^^No kidding, but most politicians ...

Go Canadians! They do this in Europe too; my friend went to Spain for school last summer and brought back lovely coins. Nate makes a fine point, but I still ...

Granted, but one day there is a silly misunderstanding that becomes a big deal and someone gets really mad that you don't feel guilty and you end up becoming a ...