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Wow, Sophie, a milk addict? At least it's not alcohol or anything. Well...okay, I was somewhat of a hot chocolate addict during the month of December. It's COLD where I ...

Thanks for the crit on Yellow Pages, and now I shall comment on your piece. I certainly had a lot of trouble understanding it. I think I was on my ...

Lane.

Healthy? Screw healthy. *guzzles soda* Juice is okay, too, but milk is delicious. I like tea, too, but not coffee. OMG I forgot hot chocolate! Hot cocoa owns everything.

"Woke Up New" The Mountain Goats.

Sand.

*makes monkey noises and scratches head* Clearly, a monkey is the best choice. Sure, we might have to clean up his poo once in a while, but that's better than ...

This is interesting, but I think you could pull it off better if you wrote it from a more personal point of view. This poem is told from the viewpoint ...

Here, where the weather seldom matches the name of the town, I look at the sky and wonder what exists past the clouds. Sometimes I think I see my face ...

Boy.

Granted, but he or she says mean things. I wish the administration would let us keep the publication offices.

While I applaud the effort you must have put into this poem, it didn't really impress me. The phrases were so general. I couldn't visualize much. Pain is immense as ...

Unfortunately, neither Clinton nor Obama is even going to get the nomination.

1. Have you critiqued at least two things by other people? That's a forum rule. Don't worry, it's not hard. It's so annoying when people don't pay attention to that ...

Granted, but now you have even worse coursework to do. I wish I played the cello.