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Ehh, "Maybe Not" Barenaked Ladies.

Granted, but you're now allergic to pecans. I wish my social studies book would spontaneously combust.

I got a great feeling from this poem. The scene was described very well. I like that each character is defined: Mickey, the funny friend? "You" - the person the ...

While I realize that the sun and moon were meant to parallel the two "sisters," the jump between the two topics was so sudden, and really not justified. Such a ...

Thanks, Cameron! I see what you're saying, and I'll definitely consider your revision while I'm editing this. When I was writing it, the "I thinks" where probably there because I'm ...

I used to ADORE Redwall. I watched the TV show on PBS and I was disgusted that it didn't match the book very well. Brian Jacques also has a book ...

Now, as the Barenaked Ladies will tell us, "If I had a million dollars, I would buy you a monkey...haven't you always wanted a monkey?!" Yes, yes I have.

Lighthearted indeed! Nothing to crit here, Claudette, it's just funny stuff. Gosh, do I understand, although I just tie mine back... Colleen :D

I, too, have a new avatar. I think I'm in love. GO MONKEYS! Colleen Edit: That was my 500th post. I am officially a Speaker of the Forum and all. ...

"Soak Up The Sun" Sheryl Crow. XD

Welcome! I'm Colleen, and my name and my hair make everyone think I'm Irish but I'm actually not...anyway, welcome to YWS! What do you write? -the not-so-Irish Colleen

Ink - I don't think shadowstorm meant to rhyme. Beauty and eternity don't rhyme. This poem is very pretty-sounding, but it's too flat and straightforward. What exactly is being described ...

Wow, big change.

Hear no dragons. See no dragons. Speak no dragons. MONKEYS FOREVER.