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Woot! *is an art fan* I have no education in art. I just tend to spend lots of time in galleries during the summer, and it is very enjoyable, and ...

The rhyme and rhythm were a nice touch, however simple. Just one rhyme problem: I searched for the holy father, The mighty divinity ; I found my God in a ...

Sociology, eh? It is a delightful thing. Colleen :D

Granted, but you fall off a mountain. :( I wish I had a pencil sharpener.

Granted, but now you can't "breath" above water. Really, it's "breathe". With an e. :wink: I wish I didn't have to go to school tomorrow.

The cancerstick line didn't really bother me in terms of rhythm. Actually, I felt it was rather well done there, except for the fact that it sticks out visually, but ...

A follow-up to my earlier post: Why does this question come up? I don't think it has anything to do with philosophers being high (although that is plausible :lol: ). ...

Granted. You're playing Monopoly. I wish my freezer wasn't broken.

I've heard this brought up before! The problem with this type of thinking ("We might not really exist") is that it can go in circles forever and never be proved ...

This fails as a poem for me because it's just a list of Hallmark phrases and hackneyed language. Why not make it more personal? Ask, "Would you die for me?" ...

We wrote pantoums (it's pronounced pan-TOOM and is a very funny word) in my creative writing class. I've only seen the style a few times before, and it was really ...

I agree with chocolatechipmuffin here; it was too wordy and little in-your-face. Even if you have a message you're trying to get across, poetry should be subtle. You don't want ...

Ah! I knew I'd heard that word somewhere! In this poem, though, it might be perceived as out of place if not pretentious. Colleen

Granted, but you were going to get a super-prestigious award, and haha, now you're not. I wish I had a muffin.

I agree that new ranks should come in. I've been a member for what, two months? And I'm already a Speaker of the Forum. I thought that 500 posts was ...