Cade

Well, there's certainly a difference in what the terms "emotional" and "emo" are describing. Emo poetry just isn't original. Even if you can relate to the feelings being expressed in ...

WHAT?! A movie? They're going to ruin it! Arrrggggh.

Title it. Name your baby. In some places, I really liked the rhyme thing you had going - it was rather like performance poetry, and I think I'd like it ...

Back with a critique, however pathetic. *is not an un-critting loser* pacing feet -- It's been hours, now Hours since what? Also, I do believe the "it's" shouldn't be capitalized; ...

Cold and broken hallelujah? Do I smell a Leonard Cohen fan? XD Welcome to YWS! I'm a poet too. Hope to read some of your stuff soon. Colleen

I agree with Cameron about the "child support" thing. I suppose this poem is pretty straightforward, and I enjoyed reading it. One thing that wasn't so great (this is more ...

Wow. Nice. ^^I just wanted to say that. I hope to return later with a critique. Colleen

It's a mistake to think that moral/ethical absolutes are only for religious people - you'll find plenty of argument for absolute moral codes without the existence of a God. I ...

Rhododendron.

Wait. "Where Do You Think You're Going?" (Dire Straits)

Pah. People who dislike Sylvia Plath are just insecure about their own darker sides. She is a lovely person.

Granted, but you kill House in your fanfic, and then a bunch of angry readers come after you with canes and scalpels. I wish they made mini cheesesticks. (Honestly, I ...

Well, there's an inherent problem in that religion and law are both manmade. :? My personal opinion is that people should turn to religion individually for guidance on issues such ...

Now, I'm going to sound awfully stupid here, but I'm having trouble...getting it. I've spent a little while looking at it, and it just hasn't spoken to me, and I'm ...

All- I definitely see what you guys are saying about extending it. I've tried! The problem I'm running into is that I don't know what to extend. I like the ...