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One small thing though, on the second line do you mean mind not minds because it doesn't ryhme with the next alternate with a s. Ah, but slant/imperfect rhyme is ...

cadmium: Spliced - split apart sliced - signs of abuse, cuts That is a very good point! Still, I think it could do without. You might just pick one of ...

It is a growing trend, this whole rotten idea of putting political correctness and the "feelings of others" over the basic right of free speech. As others have said, I ...

Interesting subject. Not knowing all that much about the Bible, I can't really comment specifically on whatever references might be made here. As is often my complaint, this was too ...

Fifty years passed.

I, too, write on my own skin, although I'm not much for limericks. I like photography, too! I've sort of been living in the school darkroom lately. *blinks, shies away ...

In my thoughts, he’s mine, and in misty dreams filled up with romance that stems from the minds of wistful girls with un-held hands. It seems these wild thoughts are ...

I remember seeing on the news that everyone was surprised that Bush wasn't on the list. I, too, was surprised. I harbor a rather strong dislike for the man, but ...

I wrote an ekphrastic (also ecphrastic) that I posted here! I actually just sent it off to a local library contest. :) I share your sentiments on the deadlines. I ...

My point is that you cannot treat your children the same way as you treat your pets, because they're very different animals. Saying 'well, I hit my horse' doesn't mean ...

(I actually had to watch the Grapes of Wrath movie in like eighth grade but I'm trying really hard to forget it so I can read the book properly.) Oops, ...

I've never been a fan of repeating the title in the last line. It's too, well, erm, repetitive, and rarely sounds right. It seems especially out of place in your ...

I got spankings when I was a kid, and like everyone else has said, I turned out...mostly...normal. I think it's perfectly acceptable and effective because children respond most easily to ...

The main issue in my school is with publications. The newspaper has had plenty of problems with the administration in the past. The most notable this year: My friend and ...

I'm share Brad's feelings on the flower-love thing. As others have pointed out, good imagery, but I think that's most of what this poem has going for it. It actually ...