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Cade

  • Lounge, The Re: Bye Everyone!

    Nate go bye-bye? Bye-bye! :D

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Dark Eyed Girl

    Oh, no, I agree with you, Fand! I meant that the sentence structure could have been mixed up a little. Certainly, poetry should express a lot in few words, which ...

    Jun 4, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: FIRST BLUE STAR PARTY!

    Me, too, ShadowTwit, me too. Yay Cal! *blue star confetti* If there was actually any food in my house, I would go bake you a cake in the shape of ...

    Jun 2, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Prelude to Suite 1

    Hmmm...I imagine the dots are only there to represent indents. Ah, I should've picked up from the title that it's after a piece. It's very cool that you could write ...

    Jun 2, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Prelude to Suite 1

    Ah, a taker for the musical poetry challenge? Was this in response to or inspired by a specific musical piece, or intended to sound musical alone? I applaud your use ...

    Jun 2, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: Dreamer's going to college!

    Wow! That's such an accomplishment. Congrats! -Colleen

    Jun 1, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: A Very Serious Question

    *dons Mickey Mouse ears and looks threatening*

    Jun 1, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Dark Eyed Girl

    What really bugged me about the structure here was that the sentences are sort of stilted, and that "A black bowler hat perched jauntily on his head" is a fragment. ...

    May 31, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: Only Speak in Song Titles

    Okay, stay, but you're still "Not My Friend" (Norah Jones).

    May 31, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Fountainhead

    Objectivism is really fascinating...and Atlas Shrugged is incredibly intimidating. I was reading last year and gave up...I'm going to try again soon. We the Living is much shorter and considerably ...

    May 30, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Villanelle

    Hurrah revision! *applauds* And of course I'll look at it...if finals don't kill me. *shudders*

    May 30, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Fountainhead

    It can be dull at times. Rand not only wanted to write a novel, she wanted to babble about her philosophy at the same time. I liked it, though. I ...

    May 30, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Villanelle

    I believe that in a villanelle, the middle lines of each stanza ought to all rhyme with each other, making the ryhme scheme aba aba aba aba abaa. Unfortunately, escape, ...

    May 30, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: (if so) Why are athiests more intellegent on average?

    Atheism doesn't have to be just about emphasis on science. Some religions and philosophies don't have a god or gods, and the people who follow them are still considered "religious," ...

    May 28, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: (if so) Why are athiests more intellegent on average?

    The point Sureal made about the uneducated poor turning to religion is a good one. This is one of those "third factor" things. Two sets of data might seem to ...

    May 27, 2007


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge