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Go back to the first two lines. Think about nighttime dreams and the images they conjure up, and how that can be comparable to the "dreams" that we're supposed to ...

*cough*moron*cough*

Hey Gadi! I've already seen some of your stuff floating around...but anyway, welcome to YWS. (I love Harry Potter too. *sniffles*) -Colleen

I knew it was completely cliche but sometimes its good to bring back the classics right? :wink: Ah, but when you want to bring back classic ideas, you must present ...

ARGH I had my critique all typed out and lovely and Internet Explorer decided to ruin it all. Anyway, I think this piece is a great example of telling a ...

Hey, [s]Amanda[/s] Gretta! I adore Kudos bars. I've heard of Acorn...isn't that mainly a haiku mag? I thought about submitting to it, but I haven't read most of what they ...

Oh, Melia! I love you! The idea of switch the ellipse and the period is brilliant ^_^ I think it brings out the feeling even more. [I detest ellipses, but ...

Well, I critted the first one, so I might as well do the second, eh? Again, I see the same flaws in description that were in the first one. The ...

You totally stole my picture post title. I did? I'm terribly sorry! Would you like it back? But thank you for the short and sweet comment. :smt040

Baroness Colly the Woebegone of Goosnargh Leering ... HOORAY!

Hooray French? Thanks for giving the meaning, or I would've been babbling on like this: "Does that mean 'Liver'? What does your liver have to do with books?" Hmm, we ...

I find this poem charming, but also a little wordy; that's what struck me on my first read and the feeling didn't wear off. I feel like the poem is ...

Go Nate! *shuffles off to Resources to look*

Kitty - I, too, wish I had some thorns, but the florist the orthodontist got the rose from must've cut them off. Clau and Areida - The surface is actually ...

Thanks, Adam. Story: The leaves and petals were actually from the rose that my orthodontist gave me after I got my braces off. It was a very nice rose, and ...