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I agree with Fand. I liked this poem; it didn't feel too abstract, there weren't any annoyingly complex double metaphors, etc. The more I read it the more satisfying it ...

The pimple face. At least you'd get the right tickets, no? AP Physics or AP US History? (Erm, yes, I am freaking out about junior year.)

Alaska, definitely. Foosball or air hockey?

French toast. :elephant: or :smt031 ?

*agrees with Fand* I would also like to add on to what Bloo said about the rhyme scheme...technically, "me" and "me" are not rhymes, they are, in fact, the same ...

I know! I hate it when it comes in the shower, though, because there's nothing to write with and sometimes I forget it when I finally wash the shampoo out ...

I did try going back, but my post had apparently fallen off the edge of the internet. Thanks, Nate!

This isn't exactly a loading problem, but it might be a problem with the site...just a few minutes ago, when I tried to post, I was apparently logged off the ...

I do not just happens....I honestly don't know how to answer that question.

I agree with Snoink and others. This poem does suffer from too much description, but hold on to it. When I have writer's block and I force myself to write, ...

Cheese puffs.

It's too... one-sided. I mean, when I write a story, I cannot portray any character as totally evil because then the character loses interest. There has to be something good ...

I wish that there was some sort of tool I could use to go back and see all the posts since a certain date...if I go on vacation or just ...

Yeah, I definitely liked the old way better. It looked much more...finished and professional.

The library computer says I only have ten...no, nine minutes left on the internet, so I have to make this short. 1. This is awfully wordy. I'm drowning in it. ...