Cacophony

*drools* ooh vampires... Yeah vampires rule :D This reminds me a lot of an Ann Rice novel. Same ornate, formal language and faint dry wit in places. not terribly original, ...

This is pretty good. I love how you show the relationship between Ravin and Celareena. They're both interesting characters. Also I really get the sense that this is the calm ...

I loved your writing.. i was totally engrossed and i think you should definetly continue it. I especially loved the phrase 'mortals seem to be dying to get in here.'..... ...

I moved this to Other, as it has an aspect of Horror to it... -Z Okay. I suppose it could probably fit in either one :D.

ohhhh... I like this! I love it how the vampire thinks. It would be a good story to continue! I presume the two people the vampire kills are the children ...

Also, when I got near the end of your story, there was "I'm not liking others to share my space"... 'Space' is a word that displaces the story. My term ...

I write because sometimes I'll get a story (or sometimes a line of poetry) stuck in my head and writing is the only way to get it out. Or a ...

I have to write at my desk because I don't have a laptop and my handwriting looks like chicken scratch. If I wrote by hand, I wouldn't be able to ...

This is pretty good :). I'm looking forward to reading more. Security officer John Thompson was having a bad morning. It wasn t just the fact he d got up ...

Sadistic vampire warning: Anyone bothered by sadistic blood-sucking vampires should look away now. This is a slightly edited version of a story I wrote when I was seventeen. It was ...

Hello and welcome. This place is great, isn't it ? :D Oh and I hate exams too. They are definitely cruel and unusual punishment, lol. My finals are coming up ...

Well to be honest, I can't really taste much difference between coke and pepsi so I can't reallly say which is better. I like them both, so usually I just ...

This is a good start :D. I'm curious to see where this story is going. You have some nice descriptions. Some of your sentences are long and hard to follow ...

This poem is pretty good :D. Yeah the subject is a little overused, but I like how you dealt with it. Anyway, I found the rhyming kind distracting. I think ...

I stumbled on the this link a while ago. It lists common problems in science fiction and fantasy but a lot of it probably applies to writing in general too. ...