Cacophony

Patriots, of course. I would say they're going to kick the Eagles' butt, but I don't want to jinx anything. :D

Alright, I finally caught up with this story. This part's pretty good :). (Heh, Cacophony is too lazy to comment on all the parts she missed, though she did read ...

I think it depends on the situation. If it's just depression, I don't think suicide of any kind is the answer. On the other hand I can understand assisted suicide ...

I love the imagery in this poem. It's absolutely briliant and it adds to the overall theme :). but I wonder how long until you, also bow down before the ...

I'm a little bit of both really, but I probably more of a basher. Most of the line editing (i.e fixing typos, getting it to flow better, etc.) I do ...

Alright, I finally caught up with this (Cacophony is way behind on her reading ;)). It's pretty good. Your world is interesting, and I like how you built up the ...

Not a bad start...:D. There's a lot of things you could do with this. I think the pacing is off though. It moves too fast. I'm curious though, who is ...

Hey, welcome to the site :). It's still pretty new so we're all newbies here, really. The site's only been for a little over a month. Oh and I write ...

So dragon's started it, huh? Guess I'm not the only one who likes them :D. Anyway, this is pretty good. Your style is interesting. You managed to sum up a ...

I finally caught up on reading this. It's pretty good :) I don't usually like omniscient povs, but I think it works well in the first scene. I like your ...

I like this. You have interesting style, and I love the imagery. I can picture this being read out loud at poetry reading or something. The slight criticism is the ...

I'm from south-eastern Massachusetts but I'm going to college in Boston, which is about an hour from where I live. There's a lot of trees and cranberry bogs in my ...

Oooh, this was good. Never read a vampire story before. Glad you liked it :D But I want more! I command thee to continue thy story! Don't worry. I will. ...

well, being one of realistic fiction and historical fiction, i thought the subject matter was rather remorseful--i dont usually read things like this. Well vampires aren't for everyone. I like ...

Nifty........ I usually don't read vampire stories but the title made me curious :D Anyway I really like it! I felt as if I was inside the vampire's head or ...