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I had a pretty hard time following, everything was kind of jammed together. It was alot like thinking on ritalin

it lacked substance

it reminded me too much of a emo-ish twilight. A few words you were a little dependant on but that's not much of a problem. You have good style, but ...

This really just seems to be filler for another story. There wasn't much of a plot other than some martin scorsese type bandits chattin over cuts. If you decide to ...

the girl who reviewed you wasn't far off from the truth. I'm not gonna get on you for grammar or anything like that. I couldn't really finish it. It could ...

aw man, bummer haha. I'd much rather hear i have cancer than something tell me i write like stephanie meyers

I was trying to find a place to start an online portfolio, saw this, figured i try it out. Turned out pretty good

The illustrated man- ray bradbury. I'm on the story about the automated house still going about it's business even though there weren't even people living on the planet anymore. It's ...

It was a pretty good story. It really captured a childs perspective on bad dreams. The voice didnt really match the character all too well though, that is if your ...

it was a good story, you should've included the first part of your story too. I would've liked to seen more characterization other than the spoiler.

i thought it was a decent concept. There wasn't much to it though, put some meat on it's bones, dust it off and i'm pretty sure it'll be more enjoyable ...

i thought it was damn good. Each character was well identified with their own personal traits and they complimented and foiled each other pretty damn good. It was a good ...

[spoiler]When I die hallelujah by and by, i'll fly away fly away.[/spoiler Something was off, I could even feel it with my eyes closed. Sunlight warmed my skin, a nice breeze ...

Couldn't really grasp on it. It had great style to it though don't get me wrong, but even after readin the second piece to it still had difficulties. It just ...

So i did not read the first six parts but i have to say this part was not bad. it was a good nastolgic feelng there at the beginning, the ...