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Re: Hard to Handle Part 1
Three words, pretty damn good
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: The Wild Ones Ch.1 & 2
I thought the plot was pretty good, i'm a big fan of the life after people concept. The description really painted the picture for me, and i loved the way ...
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Re: My Forbidden Love
It wasn't too bad. As far as poems go i liked it. C.S.
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Chocolate tarts, dolls, and Friday afternoons
I gotta say that was pretty fun to read. I got a nice calvin and hobbes vibe from it. I enjoyed it and it was easy to follow. Keep it ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Alone - The Beginning
i thought it was pretty good, and i'm always a big fan of apocolyptc stories. The description in it was incredible as well. It was a very enjoyable read and ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: One Last Song
I wrote a series of bedtime stories for a girl I enjoyed. She's gone, but the words i wrote for her aren't. Along time ago, before even history could remember, ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Coma(The Shell)
First off, i'm not sure what you were trying to convey with this, second off it really had no point. It had style to it but i really don't get ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Where The Music Is
I thought it was a decent story. You changed things up at some points though, make which portion of the MC that was injured more clearer. Another thing i didn't ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Family Problems
pretty damn good man. It had that gripping terror of being caught after the fact and things just going downhill. You captured every man's fear of cheating, getting caught, and ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Heal.
I thought it was a pretty good read but had a hard time paying attention to it mainly because of the romance portion of it. It wasn't bad or anything, ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Dispair
there really isn't much to get out of reading this. It was pretty short but i still had to kind of force my way through it.
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Of A Death
Man, i gotta say i have yet to be dissapointed whenever i read any of your works. I liked the irony that as many able bodied people attempted to off ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Fragile Things Battle scene
I thought that was pretty damn good, and i'm not normally one for fantasy. I can't really find any problem with it, thought it was all good to read. You ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Existence
I thought it was great. I like reading anything to do with mortality, and this is the first thing i've read by anyone that handles the aspect of immortality well. ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Do After Death
Wrote this one with some pretty hard feelings after i got sent away, haven't touched or looked at it since i was 17 Dead is dead. That used to be ...
Aug 4, 2010
