CSheperd

Wow...this one was great hahaha Loved the punchline.

That's pretty good. I liked how it was a flashback. It makes me think about going back to school and daydream of my own summer mischievities. Maybe for the thing ...

Eh it was alright, kind of just waided through it. Felt borderline too descriptive.

This is a series of entries from a journal I found in an abandoned house. The property it is on has long since become an illegal dumping site. Here are ...

My honest opinion of your story was that it was well written ad the descriptions were pretty vivid. You truly painted it out for anyone who reads it. On the ...

I've been trying my hand at dystopic writing for the last couple of months(Ever since watching Metropolis). I've been rolling with the question of what would happen if the general ...

Gotta say, I really liked it. The characters were well formulated. Your descriptions were next to immaculate. It reminded me alot of the torture scene in Reservoir Dogs but only ...

This story, I have to say, was a pretty difficult read. You seemed to jump perspective quite a bit from third to first, especially when you were trying to show ...

I thought the overall description and personifacation in the story was what stood out most about it. It was very vibrant look into something as simple as a house fire. ...

A lonely procession of foot steps echoed down the street. The night had calmed down to nothing more than empty streets and somber shadows. A man staggered silently with a ...

For being so short that really captivated me. It was pretty descriptive and i really could get a feel for the main character. I hope there is more that follows.

it was pretty good, but there wasn't much emotion to it, not trying to sound like a broken record. The plot was pretty stiff with little detail on it.

I thought it was pretty good. The description was pretty vivid as was the character detail.The character interraction was great too. The plot didn't really draw me in too much, ...

i thought that was very good. It had such nice description to itand i got the arizona trailer park in the summer kind of feeling from it. I was hooked ...

I tend to disdain romantic stories but i thought this was pretty good. The character connections were pretty great as was the setting for the story. It gave me a ...