CJeanene13

I liked the feeling of it. I too, have wanted a really cute high school romance or a fairy tale ending. Its true that it can happen in reality. I ...

Hey! Welcome. I'm sorta new too, but so far, it's great. I love reading others work, and if you ever have a question feel free to ask... I think. Haha, ...

Wow, very, very expressive. It is sad. But I really liked the emotion and description. You needs capitals when you begin a new sentence. And here are some things I ...

My spine shivers, my breath comes in gasps. My head spins wildly. My heart flutters with the beat of a hundred drums. My lips are taken in a deep kiss. ...

Wow, amazing poem. I think that was amazing. The poem painted wonderful and intriguing images in my head. The song was clear. I felt at peace. This an amazing poem, ...

I loved the emotion and the dramatic scenes that I could see in my head. The mistakes have been made above. I was kind of confused about when she shot ...

Wow, that was good. It was short, simple, and full of tons of meaning. You just need a capital W on the first line on Why. Thats about all I ...

The first thing I caught was 'Across from me was the computer desk where a purple glitter lamp sat, I forgot to turn the thing off last night again.' So ...

Wow, it caught me. There is the mistake "abnormally clam" so just the spelling. I agree with the above comments and expanding a little. It was very good so far. ...

What ya'll think?

~First draft. Very open to help~ The last dance, for her, was like dancing with a broom. It was stiff and very unentertaining. She kept a fake, uninterested smile on ...

Well, I was kinda depressed and sad. I felt alone. So, I just sat down one day and wrote. Something I do when I need to express something. Thanks for ...

I love how you explained every word and made a comparison to it. I loved the emotion felt the way you describe the feelings for love. Again, I agree with ...

Holy Moly! This was addicting to me. I loved the suspense and the mystery. I have a few questions though. How old is Sophia and are they poor or rich? ...

Thanks for the great reviews. It will help me tons! Thanks again!