CJeanene13

Wow, you left me hanging! Darn. I really was getting into it. I enjoyed that a lot. I really want to read more. Anyways, for the help. I don't know ...

I loved it. It is one of those poems that expresses how I feel. It was amazing. I loved the ending. It looks like all that I caught has already ...

*This is really new and I know it is terrible right now! Comments are greatly appreciated!* I’d fallen again. Fallen a little bit too hard this time. But I it ...

One or Two???? I sat by his bed, the words flowing out. 'Daddy it's okay, you can leave us now. I don't want you to suffer to be in more ...

I could tell I was dreaming. His smile had clouded my sleep-fogged brain; the sound of his voice lulled me deeper into a welcome slumber. The way his eyes lit ...

Oh wow. I thought that was one of the most amazing things i have ever read. I am so hooked onto it and it has such a great vocabulary. I ...

I sit again in this cold and sullen world. I can't tell you how long I've waited to run, but I'm stuck in this hell of worries and pain. The ...

I am so not going to say anything negative, because I bet most of that is above. But I am going to say that I am completely hooked to this ...

Wow, I couldn't believe how much I could relate to the prologue. I feel that way too. I want a guy to like me so badly, because I like him. ...

Wow, I wish I was this great of a photographer. Those were some amazing photos. This is the kind of work I like. Not only are they or things people ...

I also noticed what the others noticed. So I don't have any mistakes for you to correct, besides those mentioned above. One thing I noticed is that probably by accident ...

I really like the beginning, but it started to get a little weird. Especially after the first swear word started flying. I like the beginning, but it got a little ...

Prologue: I seesawed through unconsciousness. My dreams were only the sharp daggers of pain and the erratic breathing coming through my lungs. The car had hit me with such force, ...

I could see the longing of the person, feel their emotion. It was very well done. I agree with the comments made above, except that I haven't had a boyfriend ...

I love the emotion that is in this poem. It is very true and very overwhelming. I felt amazed at the emotion the tension. It was very well done. I ...