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Re: I Fought With the Spawn of Satan.
I really I liked this story, it was fun to read. It kind of reminds me of the movie mean girls, but a little less brutal and a bit more ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Give it a Chance (Chapter One)
This is a really good story. It seems very, sort of, fast passed even though the setting is rather mundane, and the situation isn't all that uncommon. The only question ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Winged Chapter the First
Wow this is awesome. I love the way it flows and fits together like it does. :) but on this part "I was exhausted by the, but Riley hadn’t slowed ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Saviour (Prologue)
This is great. I'm not good with pointing out grammatical errors or things like that, but as far as I see there aren't any. I like how your prologue is ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Cool Digital Art
I tried to look at these pictures but the text isn't a link. I copied and pasted it in the address bar but that didn't work either. If you want ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: A Child's Dream
This is a beautiful poem. I'm not good at writing poetry myself, but I like reading it. What I see. what I feel when I read this is a girl, ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Dark Thing
This is for a contest that has to be exactly 250 words and it has to end with the word it started with. That's why its not very descriptive I ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Dark Thing
Death watched her from the darkest corner of the cell. It crept among the shadows, waiting for her to let her guard down, watching carefully for its chance to pounce. ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter One)
This is a great story, real interesting. But I think in some places its a little rushed. I love the description of the truck, and Rory's attitude in the beginning ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: 317 (1)
First thing's first, When I first found this story, in the Novels & Novellas section, it only lists the fourth chapter, so I accidently read that first. :) you might ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
I'm new here, My friend (AwesomeSocks) made me come on here and I have to say it's... interesting. :) But really you all seem like cool people and I can't ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: The Last One Standing ~ Prologue
Aaron fell to the ground, army crawling through the thick underbrush. Her heart pounded in her ears as her breath came out in swift puffs of white. The night air ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Winged Prologue
That was really cool :) I can't wait for you to write more. But like other people have pointed out the whole "magical button-like thing" breaks the mood, and the ...
Aug 29, 2011