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Re: Alphabet Altercations
Rewind: Remembering your name was the easiest thing I ever did-- reverberations soaked my tongue and I could really taste the consonants swirling into the sides of my cheeks and ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
But fly, dear sparrow; even the storms cannot stop your flight to heaven.
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Ominous words, he spoke-- dark opals pouring from his lips like an omen that you read in a book. There it was: The Grim. Oblivion in a hound, in a ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Somewhere far away between ribbons of rain and sunshine; happiness.
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Lovely notes littered the floor like forgotten rose petals, wrinkled and loose-- looking down, I knew that you hadn't meant for me to see them, lost and almost sad. But, ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Annie Cresta
Hey there, Eli! Sorry for the wait. So, a quick couple thoughts on this: I like the idea and simplicity. You did a good job at creating someone who looks ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Glassy footsteps break more easily than thought; step lightly, dear ones.
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Idolatry spoke from half-open lips, awed-- I saw quiet murmurs from her lips, but his eyes were icy, icy, icy, cold and uninterested. It was awful, knowing how quickly he ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Eastward, you say. Everything begins there-- the sun rises, the earth speaks and rumbles and raises its arms to stretch. Esther looks are you, eyeing you curiously. Every day? You're ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Reviewing
Hi there! So, you want to learn how to review? Well I'm here to help you! You can post on here and let me know if you want some help. ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
And memory sings. Images of her leak from my eyes, cold and wet.
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The difference of wings
Hey there; quick review, as I'm still waking up and this just blew me away. The anatomy/proportions are perfect. Lovely. You might consider straightening out his right hip bone a ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
the heavenly choir resounded; yet my song broke under nostalgia.
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Time for some fun, yes? Let's. So, this concept of this Time-Waster poetry exercise is quite simple: Write a poem using your letter as the first letter of each line. ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
falling through dark storms, and tripping through the lightning; death awaited me.
Feb 22, 2011
