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Wonderful piece- the emotion is really well done. However, you might consider using some more figurative language. It might just be because I'm kind of addicted to imagery, but I ...

Hi there Skins, I'm back. For probably the umpteenth time. :) I was wondering if you have some time, could you please take a look at this? I'd really appreciate. ...

I love it! Not only because it has Star Wars in it, but the tones are beautiful. The shot itself is wonderfully done, but the processing really brings it to ...

Unconscious suicide in insomniatic fervor, the waking mind has been to sleep while the body cannot; the soul doesn’t know where to go. My eyes have been burning and dry ...

This is pretty amazing. The content is simply spectacular (though the length dwindled with each one), but the actual technicalities of the writing were superb as well. I really like ...

Hey- I was wondering (if you have the time) if you could please look at this. If you don't have the time, I totally understand. :) Thanks either way!

I was wondering, if you have the time, could you please take a look at this? Thanks! :D

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this. It's interesting- the language itself is interesting, the rhythm, the shadows of a rhyme scheme hidden in there- I think I ...

Your fingers ran the line down my collarbone, while you held me, soft and warm as you always were, and you looked at me with earnest in the set of ...

I think that these are all sincere and powerful images- but they're just that: images. This feels like more of a framework to me than a poem, but a really ...

Wonderful concept- I've seen this type of thing before, and I've always loved how creative it is. Unfortunately, there are some numbers blocking the cigarette in this one, and it's ...

Thanks so much for the input guys- I tried reworking it a bit, and am going to work on a bit more I think, and try to create some more ...

I've commented on the other ones on flickr, so I'm just going to focus on the first one in this review, if you don't mind. I really like the bokeh, ...

This is cute! I love the scowl and little details you included like the pointed ears and horns. The only thing I would consider changing or working on is the ...

Wonderful piece- very sweet. Have you ever found love? Nice opening line- leaves a lot of opportunity for development. Seeing her.. And not knowing what to say? Talking to her, ...