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Hi there :) Welcome to the site! Now, onto the review. Like footprints in the snow, ("footprints" is one word) making our print in the endless abyss, "endless abyss" sounds ...

Love it- the style is wonderful, and I love the emotion. Nice job on the casual, almost-sketchy lines... they don't feel constrictive, but they aren't sloppy either. I DO think ...

Hey, if you have some time, would you mind taking a peek at this? Thanks so much! :D

Our hands fell into the ocean like coral shovels, lumpy and misshapen in the midst of glassy tides, and we took the salt away with closed palms, desperately trying to ...

Hi there :) If you have some extra time, could you please take a look at this? Thanks so much- really appreciate it!

Hi there :) So this is an interesting shot- you have a wonderfully defined focal point, the positioning is great.... but the focus is a bit off. I think that ...

Honestly, I really don't know how people are able to critique this. This is probably the most beautiful piece I've read from this site, and each image was pretty much ...

Hi there :) So, I like this piece- it has great imagery, and conveys it well with simplistic and effective phrasing. The concept is interesting and original and really held ...

Okay: just to start this off, this is going to be a lame review. I apologize in advance, but after someone hits a level so high above my own, I ...

I can't decide whether to write this in prose rather than this poem or not. Words lay unspoken on the brink of his lips, which he nervously flicked his tongue ...

Beautifully penned (or typed). Your actual language (as in structure and word choice) is wonderfully executed. The rhythm feels a bit off to me at the very beginning, but slowly ...

Hi! Welcome to the site! That's awesome that you participate in so many sports! I used to play a whole lot of sports, but had to stop because of a ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! :) What games do you play? I'm kind of a video-game person myself, though I don't have as much time to indulge as I once did. ...

I think this is great :) Haiku can be quite difficult to pull off rhythmically, but this was done wonderfully. The stops and beats are perfectly timed, and it's a ...

The last lines are superb- they hit well, and the play on words is wonderfully executed. Towards the beginning, I feel that the stops in the middle of your stanzas ...