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Re: bushcraft bowie knife
That's awesome that you do that! Honestly, I can't really say any praises or criticisms about it, because I'm not a bladesmith and know nothing on bladesmithing, but that's really ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: and then I scream.
First of all: powerful piece. I love the imagery, the straight forward and blunt presentation... it's all very effective. Great job on that :) I DO think that maybe you ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: My past week sketches
These are great... I love Invader Zim, and was thrilled to see Gaz. :) Overall, I just wanted to quickly drop by (I'm in the midst of homework) and say ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral Girl
Okay- so I actually finished this now, with a great deal of tweaking. There are obviously some parts that could use some serious work, but now I actually have the ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
If you have some spare time, could you please take a peek at this? It'd be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much! :)
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral Girl
Needs some CC, please. :) "Everything is ephemeral," she said. "The stars come out at night, and are gone by morning, scurrying back to their corners of the sky-- the ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Drawing Hands
An impossible task, at least for me. These were more doodles during my Comparative Worldviews class than anything else. I was trying to see if I could still kind of ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Journal Entry #1
Hi there :) Welcome to the site! So, onward to the review- Honestly, I really wasn't crazy about the ending. It didn't hold my attention for too long, and I ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Hey all!
Hey there :) Scotland? That's awesome! I have a couple of friends who moved up to Edinburgh, and they love it there. :) I too love writing fantasy, though to ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Going Cold Turkey
She’d fallen asleep in the haze, when everything hurt and pulsed and throbbed, each beat of her burning heart a reminder of the addiction that must be thrown from her ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Storytelling Reviews
I know that you have two things before me and limited time, but when you find some time in the next... four years or so, could you please take a ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: (Un)Timely Reviews
Hi again :) I was wondering, if you randomly find yourself with some time and boredom, could you please take a peek at this poem? It would be greatly appreciated ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Somme
First of all: powerful piece. You have some excellent imagery and set the scene very succinctly. I think that maybe your rhythm could be a little smoother in spots, but ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Starlight
Okay, so I did an edit. I still want to take a lot out, but I just have a really hard time deciding what... gosh I'm an imagery addict. >.
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Love II (Rebellion)
Hi there :) So, I just want to start off with a little bit of gushing. Cause, again, this was freakin' amazing. Overall, this piece was really strong, and had ...
Jan 10, 2011
