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Re: Where To Begin? or To End? ...thought provoked I assume.
Hi again, Mikie :) Ahh, fantasy! That's my real love, but to be perfectly honest, prose is not my strong suit. You would not believe how many fantasy/sci-fi novels I've ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: trash
Excellent- it was really simply put, but it held quite a bit in it, and it was powerful all the same. I love your language, though I will say that ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Ink Blotches
Blotches of ink clung to his skin, his weathered hands that ached-- he’d been writing all night, but the ferocity and determination in his face had slowly fallen into tired ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Tongue Tied
Ahh, "Pendulum" :) Okay, I hope you don't mind too terribly, but I might do a little line-picking-aparting. :) It's back to staring at the world through a dusty bus ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Ben Franks On: Reviews [OPEN]
Hi again :) If you have some extra time, could you please take a peek at this? It'd be greatly appreciate :) Thanks! -Coral-
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Idolatry
wings blossomed beneath his hands where he molded blades of bone in my back, holding, pushing, sculpting, tearing my marble skin with a chisel welded from idolatry and childhood insecurities; ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Poem 2
Personally, I think this was excellent. While reading it, I was kind of going, "What the hell is this?" but as I got towards the end, I finally understood, and ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
If you have some time, could you please take a peek at this? I'd very much appreciate it. :) Thanks!
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Truths
hold my hand as I doubt-- silence the trembles shooting through my arteries and quaking tendons and I’ll hold the silence you’ve spoken in between my clenched teeth, trying not ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Sketchez.
First of all: You have beautiful lines. You draw how I want to be able to draw. You have a very delicate style, the style that is perfect for drawing ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Soundscape
I actually don't think I've REVIEWED this one before, though I've definitely seen it. :) Okay, so onto the actual review now :) I love beginning. It's very simple and ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Painful Admittance
Hi there: I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I just didn't really know what to say about it. I still don't. BUT, I'm going to ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: abiotic
First of all, I love your work. I've told you before, but I just love the style with which you write-- it's always very simple, but so effective and weaves ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Anime...?
Awesome job! The eye seems a bit off to me, mostly because the lines are a little shaky in there, while they aren't anywhere else. If you cleaned up that ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Shatter
So, I think I've seen this one before. But I love it. Even when I'm reading something of yours anew, it still feels like I'm experiencing it, like it's going ...
Jan 14, 2011
