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lily: you are awesome.

I wish I could control time so that I could curl up with tea and a book whenever I wanted.

Hey there :) So, I think that the main thing you could work on is the framing and focal point. In either one, I didn't really feel a purpose; there ...

The details were dim, and the length insufficient; and yet, it was loved. (the first two lines lie, I promise!)

Honestly, I think that rhyming adds a great deal of complications/hardships for poetry, but that, of course, is my own stylistic view. For rhyming, I've always found that keeping a ...

Hello Prose-Master. I was wondering if you could please take a look at this , as I'm terrible at prose, and have no idea how this is. Even just a ...

The world had gone from gold to grey in the matter of a couple of years. They’d tried to stop it, of course, before the government was so torn apart; ...

Commands complete.

Hi there, here as requested! :) So, I liked this-- you put a really nice twist on the end and your rhymes were good. You might consider putting in some ...

Fortunately, the prince was wearing a super-special amulet that didn't allow him to die, and having learned his lesson, he instead ate up the rest of the mix.

Hi there :D Can you please take a look at this poem? I would really, really appreciate it. Thanks! :) -Coral-

Misery fell to her lips, ready to sing sad stories as she slept.

Jealousy is seeping from my pores. First of all, great job. Now, the review (not that I actually have that much to say). That crumpled green line offers false hope, ...

Insomnia haunts us, sadness in the mirror: bags under our eyes.

Winds whip the earth, snuffing Hephaestus as he danced through ancient trees.