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Re: a collection of word-inspired spontaneities.
Challenge by a friend in RL: write a couple pieces in the typical medieval fantasy setting. Start with one word on the first line. If you have any more suggestions ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: light will be my stepping stone.
Hi there. :) So, I'm finally here. I'm a bit (okay, really)sick and am a bit bleary eyed here, but ready to review. So, this may be due to my ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Worldbuilding sketches
Short thing, cause I have no idea how to review this: Gorgeous. I love the use of opacity and color, and your lines are wonderful. Personally, I've never done this ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The "I wrote a poem, but don't need reviews" thread
"I can't get it off." "Here, use a scrubby." "You don't understand. My skin is raw. I'm still covered in it. I can't scrub anymore, I'll bleed." "Well take a ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
(They can.) Granted, but they're simply too awesome. I wish that I wasn't sick anymore.
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: 'Tiger Mom' Claims that Chinese Parenting is Superior
Just a short thought: This style of parenting is dependent on others not following this style. Not everyone can be No. 1 at school. If everyone were to play the ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but it bites you and then you're rabid and th- AHHH! I wish I had a rabies vaccine.
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Nosy Neighbor rhymed, crimed, and eventually died; Loomy was cruel.
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for being dead! D:
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Kafka's intellectually stimulating reviews
Hey Kafka! Could you please take a look at this ? It would be much appreciated. :) Thanks!
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Crescendos of Color
Crescendoing colors burst from beneath his eyes; it was like he'd been staring at the sun for a decade, though he was still only nine. Everything burst with light, too ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*
Delicious oil.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Losing
Hi there :) So, first of all, there were quite a few spelling errors/grammar mistakes. I'll catch those in bold in all the quoted pieces, but I would suggest using ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
They were glass, hazy and glazy and so far gone from all that we had.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
Last three songs are made of awesome. Paper Trails by Emmy the Great ^^
Feb 15, 2011
