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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but it breaks and shorts out your room every five minutes. I wish that I wasn't sick while I had all my performances going on. >.
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Arachnophobia
she hugged her arms to her chest and desperately tried to keep herself from clawing at her ribs and tearing the skin from bone like paper from words-- she could ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: The difference of wings
Hey there; quick review, as I'm still waking up and this just blew me away. The anatomy/proportions are perfect. Lovely. You might consider straightening out his right hip bone a ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
I think this is my new haunt If you don't mind. It's a poem, kind of long. :/ Thanks so much!
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Mustard's condiments all over your Art
Lookee here, you're already in high demand If you have the time-- it's a poem, and to just warn you, it's a wee bit long. Thanks!
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: An Empty Stoup
Quick Author's Note: Again, as I said with my last religious poem thing, this is not meant to be offensive. This is simply an observation on those that don't know ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
the heavenly choir resounded; yet my song broke under nostalgia.
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Alphabet Altercations
Time for some fun, yes? Let's. So, this concept of this Time-Waster poetry exercise is quite simple: Write a poem using your letter as the first letter of each line. ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
falling through dark storms, and tripping through the lightning; death awaited me.
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
were the lost in gray-- they were pale in the summer, sleeping through the day.
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
It climbed up my arm, nimble as they are, and I screamed as it attacked.
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! So, the point system works like this: You need 100 points to post a new work. To get points, you can review other people's works. ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Storm Clouds
There's still that bloodstain on your collar; that spot where my lips once pressed against the starched white cotton, mingling with the scent of sun-soaked summer days. Your nervous sweat ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The tortential spam that is my poetry.
Hi Ed. I'm here. Completely UNrequested. Deal with it. :) My cheeks were slit, and handcuffs locked inside (of my tongue), hooking my words to your wrists, where you just ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: I don't mean to offend anyone, but...
I think it depends on how you're using it. If you're portraying it as a slum or something, and that's realistic, then I think that's fine. But, if it could ...
Feb 20, 2011
