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Thanks to everyone who helped! ^^ Based on my L poem from Lovely notes littered the floor like forgotten rose petals, wrinkled and torn from their sheaths. Looking down, I ...

Lovely notes littered the floor like forgotten rose petals, wrinkled and loose-- looking down, I knew that you hadn't meant for me to see them, lost and almost sad. But, ...

"Tell me what love is," she said, heart-shaped face resting on her palms. I looked up at her. She lay on her stomach next to me, and I lay on ...

Hey there, Eli! Sorry for the wait. So, a quick couple thoughts on this: I like the idea and simplicity. You did a good job at creating someone who looks ...

RAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWR Thanks. c:

Good friends telephone whilst eating pizza.

Hi there, and welcome to the site! That's awesome that you focus so clearly on that time period. I've always loved medieval stuff-- I'm not any good at writing about ...

Glassy footsteps break more easily than thought; step lightly, dear ones.

Hi there! So, I thought this was really good. However, I do have two complaints. 1. Disconnection. Throughout the poem, your were speaking with the father and his daughter was ...

So, if you don't mind, I'm going to do more of a conceptual review than anything else. First off: repetition. I think the repetition in the second half works very ...

So... I liked this. A lot. I don't quite know what to say on it yet, so I think that I'm going to come back with a review. You kind ...

Oh Gosh I'm lame. I am now two-thirds of the people here. Please don't hate me. Anyways. I have this crazy little piece right here and I'm not entirely sure ...

FINALLY. I get to actually see something you wrote. It's crazy. Okay. Anyways. Onto an attempt at a critique. So, I think I like this. I'm still not entirely decided, ...

Rawwwwwwwwwr. Hey there, lily. Could you please take a quick look at this ? I would be extraordinarily grateful. ^^ Thanks!

Idolatry spoke from half-open lips, awed-- I saw quiet murmurs from her lips, but his eyes were icy, icy, icy, cold and uninterested. It was awful, knowing how quickly he ...