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Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
There is the flesh of a king and gold on your hands and you have to wonder how holy this can be when gore hangs on the inside of your ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: je veux voir montréal
There are some excellent lines up above me-- awesome imagery, Rybastah. But, it all feels a bit disconnected to me right now. Relate it more. Put some more purpose behind ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I might be wrong: Kylan's NaPo
Last one you have there is fantastic.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
"shatter" you will taste my soul spread across your tongue like a bruised strawberry, grainy and stringy and fragile (don't bite down too hard, because I will break); with glass ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: biros in a half-shell
I wanna be just like you when I grow up, mum! ^____^
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: ---
*high fives Shady* ^_________________________^ (This poem was beautiful, by the way)
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
Day V "harvest" for Hannah and Pengu. c: Even as we pluck deciduous and drupes with those oustretched, cramping ligaments, bitter sits in the back of our throats like the ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.
I would tell you to let me catch up, but I'm enjoying your poetry too much.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
DAY IV I dun even know. Feel free to ignore this completely. I hope you can find my carcass somewhere in this, at least some stench or rot lacing my ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: How do you think the person above you looks?
Shushhhhhhhhhh.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Epic winning.
Beautiful.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Oh, Glory
Stop making me so jealous with your godly writing skill whatnots. Not fair. :c
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Scramblings and Ramblings
My writing is a bit odd right now. Sorry. I count dreams with an unsteady fingers and an even more unsteady mind, fingers on my pulse between the empty spots ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Oh, Glory
MISTER Loomypants. Good (insert time of day here) to you. I'm going to talk a bit on your lovely third poem, as you know. Sorry it too me so long ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: How do you think the person above you looks?
Like a girl-scout birdie.
Apr 3, 2011
