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Hey there molly! So, I'm gonna give you a critique more on your style rather than the content of this actual piece. First off: Showing vs Telling. I know, I ...

This was an experiment; I wasn't allowed to use any punctuation at the end of my lines, so it'd force myself to work on my linebreaks a bit more. runes ...

Hey there Kylan. So, to be perfectly honest, I'm a fan, so I'm probably not going to have a lot to say. (But yay for California!) i pick jovian fruit ...

Rawr. If I'm not such a slacker as I am right now, this will soon be getting a review from me. Be scared. (But not really, because I'm me.)

cicada shell rustles distaste on tongue and language spells idiocy like love spells war-- mud in eyes now like blood on knees and a fistful of teeth in the belly ...

Why do I keep trying out poetry? :P Because you have so, so much potential. Okay, Lava, so let's get started. First point: your diction is wonderful. Really, really wonderful. ...

Okay, Bob. I've read this a couple of times now (it needed it, believe me) and I'll probably read it a couple of more before dragging you into a conversation ...

Hey there pointe! So, I think that you have a nice piece here. You have a good tone and obviously know what you want to do, so that's good. Now, ...

This is wonderful! You obviously have a good amount of talent. :) So, most of my points have already been covered by other people, it seems, but I'll throw in ...

^ best argument ever

LumiLumiLu. Hello thar. So, as you know, I think that this is quite good. However, I do have to say, I think there's a great deal of excess material that's ...

God is text and vids, nothing more, but God, what a God it is with gifs.

Last of his kind, he lords over time as he does fangirls and tumblrs.

(That just made my morning) With a smile and a quirk, the whole world slowly began to love him.

fragility wanes in the wake of survival; the sun shines no more.