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This was wonderfully done; the simplicity of plot, the emotion and background given were all superb. However, there were some definite things to be worked on. A great deal of ...

Miss Ryba, these are quite excellent. However, I do have a couple of thoughts: the first is very rigid in its lines. Obviously, this was intentional, but the contrast of ...

Hey there, jalmoc! Here to do a review for you today. :3 So, the sentiment and obvious emotion behind this poem is nice. However, a lot of work needs to ...

Thank you dearly, Azila and Bob. ^^ heavy caves cradle us in black, black paws pressed to warm belly where we fall into catatonic tonics, sweet bees gathered into taste ...

Hey there, tiger! So, I think that this has potential; maybe for the framework, maybe more for concept than anything else, but I think you can use this as a ...

This is even nicer than I remembered. Expect a review. EXPECT IT. DREAD IT. All that whatnot. Hope you don't wring your hands off.

Carcasses.

i. our crepe paper lungs were failing already, big breaths bottled into our grey stomachs like iron clasps, pinching together the lining of our organs into origami creases and the ...

Actually, me and Kamas kinda started it all. >>

Felix I Hamlet Hospital I October 3rd Dr Gloria smiled as she spoke to Felix and sorted out his food, chicken on the left with an inch long barrier before ...

I have eaten ghosts and they lay between my teeth, my lips, between my fingers like quiet ivory rings-- elephant tusks are sharper than ever when you're on the back ...

Hey there, sleepthief! So, I think this has potential. Unfortunately, you've drowned this out so much in trying to achieve a specific tone/style that it doesn't quite work. First off, ...

Hey there! :) So, it looks like Azila covered most of the bases, but please, if you're still confused about anything at all, let me know. I'd love to help. ...

How have there only been two marriages? D: (Hurry up n tie the knot guys, I wanna go to one xD)

Hi there, omen, and welcome to the site! :) What do you like to draw? Write? Listen to? Those are about three of my favorite things to do as well, ...