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Re: bloated bites
There is a pattern to my word like the quick bone sew of an old mother's spry fingers, a silent diction that has letters from only one alphabet, only one ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
HAI THERE PINK! I wrote prose :3 I was wondering if you could please take a look at this. It's my entry for the big contest and needs simply oodles ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: keeping time-contest entry
Henry kept time in his closet the same way he wrote letters, with sloping, careful hands. It often tried to leak under the door as he slept, but insomnia kept ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: voiles and tulles
Looking forward to this.
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Bear, Swan, 1984
Kylan, you're good. You know this. But this piece is... frankly, almost disappointing from you. It's still wonderfully done, don't get me wrong, but personally, I wouldn't consider it up ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Hearts Like Islands
This. This gets a review from me. A broken, ridiculous review from me because it is prose and I am me and you are you. Hopeless. SOON.
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I've been experiencing the same exact thing as Kyll, except all my posts show up about 50 minutes later or so. The points and reviews register, but they don't show ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: triptych of a little man
I know, it's a monster. It's a personal piece this time. I. there’s a man tunneling in my bones who carves scrimshaw, cracks soul with shovel fingers and he keeps ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Len Kagamine
So, I typed a review up and it somehow disappeared. Sad day. Anyways, I think this is nice. You have great soft lines and the shading in the clothes is ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: I'm new
Hey there zone! Welcome to the site! If you have any questions or anything, please don't hesitate to ask; ask you've probably noticed, just about everyone is super friendly and ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: New Photography :)
Hey there! Nice shots! I think that there are only about two or three thoughts I had on these, more stylistic/basic ideas than specific nitpicks in the pictures themselves. First ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: YWLJ Cover Submissions
These are nice; I think that they all feel perhaps a little bleak, but for what you wanted to accomplish, they were all quite well done. The first felt a ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi?
Hiya Leigh! So, don't know what you like to write, huh? Well, an open mind is a wonderful mind. Try just... writing. Pick something that inspires you, think of an ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
I do believe in fairies! I do! I do! Welcome to the site. Seems like you'll fit right in. :) Have you by chance read The Name of the Wind ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: flip-curl literature
Thanks to lovely little ryba. my hands grow long, brittle stiff calcifactions bleating jazz into written word like the flip-curl of a starfish pulled from a tidepool, dried like salted ...
May 28, 2011
