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Re: an aestival whisper
Paper breath, dry as empty eyes rustled like the early morning mice who found that they could eat the walls of a broken home and taste memories, like lemongrass and ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The Blues Man
Hey there! So I think that there were a couple of things that could be played with in this poem to make it really shine as I'm sure you want ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
another little part from my ww. I am decrepit like the house on the corner that cannot sell. The floorboards creak like my early morning bones, and the porch sags ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
I've been unable to write anything of worth recently, for which I apologize. This is an unedited excerpt from a word war. My grandchildren visit like spring, nimble and lithe ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
This is more a catharsis of imagery than anything else. My mind appears to be hellbent on not producing anything lucid. always- everywhere, things that we wish we do not ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Introducing: Shuffle
EVERY DAY I'M SHUFFLIN'.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
Thank you, jags. There are lilies on the table; they smell like deep summer, like the girl in my bed, Sarah. I wake into stagnant hair, a touch of humidity ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
do you think jesus saw us? I would take anyone's ghost, anyone's skeleton to my mouth; bones churn through black and white and everything is grayscale in open books, people ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
I have plucked my eyes from their sockets like overgrown, sharp leaved weeds, and jarred them with my heart, left them in the sun to dry; they peer about them ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: voiles and tulles
Wile E Coyote somehow did it. Congratulations. :)
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
I am vapour thin and porous, a fishnet of ideals, of literature washed up on a foreign shore and I collect the wet pages with hands as wrinkled as the ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
Thanks to Kylan for this brilliant little idea. Summer thread--- this will be changing, probably quite a bit providing I can overcome my present writer's block. Verbal abuse/critiques are warmly ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: why am i here
When you ask all these questions, it makes you sound confused and not much else. They aren't thought provoking for the reader, and they aren't even that relevant to your ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: He Didn't Luv Me Back
Honestly... this didn't touch me at all. I like the idea of the lamb falling in love with the lion, sure, that works, but you need to be more creative ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head
GOH-RILLAHZ
Jun 23, 2011
