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I wasn't crazy about this poem, but the last two lines were beautiful. They were its redemption, at least for me. Overall, a decent poem with an excellently written ending.

I thought this was beautiful. In some places, it was a bit hard to follow, and I had to reread it, but the descriptions, the imagery was gorgeous and sparked ...

I think that this was a good piece- it was full to the brim with emotion. However, I think it could benefit from a wider word choice. It would make ...

I think that this piece is quite good, but has the potential to be incredible. The imagery that you've used so far is extremely vivid, and effective in setting a ...

I think this is quite good as a poem, and even better as lyrics. The repetition wasn't overdone, and was placed properly. The only thing I would suggest to watch ...

I think that while this could have been more poetically written, this piece was beautiful. It was more prose than anything else, but absolutely fantastic prose. The person you described ...

This piece was great-- the rhyming scheme was really smooth, seemed almost flawless in its subtlety. There was only one area that seemed a bit forced: He says that I ...

Description: I originally wrote this for a contest, based off of several pictures, from a different website. It eventually became something that I wrote for me, a rare occasion, as ...

First of all, I want to say, if you haven't been writing poetry before, don't expect masterpieces. It took me forever to be even remotely okay with the poetry I ...

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