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Silliness :D You used to take my covers, You used to hog my bed. You used to steal my pillow, Without leaving me a thread. You used to snore in ...

Nice introduction.. I would try to remember that this a letter though. You have to be consistent with the structure of the writing... you would not include details like eye ...

Something silly.. it's not meant to be super good, and I know the last line throws off the rhythm a bit. But I like it. :) Ladybug golashes In the ...

Wrote this a long time ago.. just found it recently. Apparently, I didn't care for it enough to post it before. I kinda like it now though. She laughs as ...

I always see phrases like "Silent Scream", and wanted to try writing something along those lines. But not like the normal things stemming from it. I don't know if I ...

This is a tanka sequence... three tanka in a row, forming one poem. c: However, I had a really difficult time finding a segway between the first and second stanza. ...

Well first of all, I wouldn't really call it a poem, but an interesting thought. Second.. it's totally ambiguous. It can be that two people never stay together, and eventually ...

A piece by itself, without any explanation, this was a bit random. A bit too random for me. HOWEVER, with the knowledge that there was a prompt behind it, I ...

This didn't have a great flow for me... it was a good piece, and I like the thought behind it.. the metaphor of losing handholds was nice.. but I think ...

Your piece as it is beautiful, with gorgeous imagery, great concept. There's one major problem: It's super choppy because of where you've spaced it. If you were to space it ...

I really liked this piece... the imagery was gorgeous and the statement strong. At first, I thought it was like.. a haiku sequence or something, until I counted out the ...

A style/topic that I don't often write on. As usual, this is another of my more objective writes, for all you curious people. :P You fly on wafts of lilac ...

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I wish I knew what you think When you look at me Out of the corners of your beautiful eyes. When you shift your hands So close to mine Like ...

I recently wrote a tanka using this exact metaphor, but with the exact opposite outlook, haha. All mended mirrors Never rid of all the cracks. Some things are just gone ...