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Okay- first of all- I didn't finish this. It was a bit confusing for me to follow. But some critiques on the writing style- Tenses- You switched back and forth ...

Nice piece.. I loved the beginning, but wasn't crazy about the rest. The imagery was a bit confusing, and the breaks seemed randomly placed.. the tone at the beginning was ...

I. Love. This. The outpouring, the absolute I'm-letting-go-of-everything-onto-this-piece-of-paper f***er, is AMAZING. Every phrase is a piece of diamond. Not gold. Gold is altogether too gaudy, and th

Great piece.. the emotion was very well expressed, the repetition very well used. I would suggest perhaps changing the structure around a bit.. it was very open, and I think ...

I like this piece..:) The last line was nice.. a different spin to the end of summer, for once. Personally, I'm not a huuge fan of rhyming poems.. that tend ...

This was an interesting piece.. I looked at the title, and had automatically assumed this was going to be about someone who was vain. Entirely opposite, haha. The first line ...

These are pretty nice.. I think that perhaps you could play with the exposition and brightness and bit, perhaps the color, and they could even be better. I too love ...

This was a nice piece.. I really like how the tone contrasts so well with the topic.. how the pace is nice and slow, while it's the end of the ...

This was a good piece.. the emotion is tangible, is easy to relate to. The whole situation is easy to relate to. I would consider breaking this up, or at ...

:O Wow. That is beautiful.. I would say that it's worth trying to fix that right eye.. the mistake on that takes away from the entire picture. If you think ...

Okay- so I'm going to critique the ones that I actually have something to say about, instead of all of them and just blathering on at random points, as I ...

Short piece... concise. I like it. c: I would consider adding in some more description. The description that you had was nice, but I think it could have been a ...

Hi there. :) I really liked the theme of this piece.. the tone was excellent, a little bit of dismay, a little bit of outrage, a dash of disappointment.. wonderfully ...

OKAY... so, first of all, I liked this piece Now, second of all, What happened to your beautiful rhyming scheme?! You had this perfect little pristine, gorgeous, subtle rhyming scheme ...

Nice piece.. the metaphors were really helpful. I would recommend running this through spell check.. there were quite a few spelling errors, which was pretty distracting. I would also suggest ...