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Hi :) So I'm going to critique your style rather than individual pieces.. I hope you don't mind. So first of all- I do like some of these angles, but ...

Hi there :) Okay, so I thought this piece was very good.. the word choice was great, the phrasing pretty, and the imagery was gorgeous. However, for some reason, it ...

Hi there :) I would consider lengthening this a bit with some more emotional description, and perhaps some descriptions of the others around them. Or are there any others around ...

These are really excellently drawn! The guy's face is a little flat, but I know that might have been done on purpose. Your lines' strokes and delicacy and wonderfully done ...

Hi there- I am not going to bring up the topic of punctuation. :P (I don't have any concrete opinions about it anyways >.>) Anywho. So I really liked this... ...

Okay, so some new photos. These weren't all taken at the same place like before though. They're kind of randomly picked, what I found first. :) Thanks! 1. This is ...

Short little attempt at humor. It's really not that funny- I promise. :) I laughed, I bawled You choked, and stalled, I waved my hand up, I couldn’t breathe- You ...

Great piece, especially for a first attempt at poetry... it's something that you get used to it. When I first started.. it was not pretty. But now I actually kind ...

So far.. I love it. I would watch your levels of description, and perhaps break it up into a couple more paragraphs, but this was wonderful. I love the voice ...

Hi there :) So.. some of the phrasing seemed kind of out of place.. You'd have this nice tone going and BAM, it would be different. Now, changing tone is ...

Okay.. I will admit.. I did not finish this. But neither did you. So we're even. ^^ Okay.. this is what I got. No background or explanations. Which is okay ...

Hi- Coral here :) So.. this was a good piece.. the introduction to the abusive relationship was very well done.. handled delicately at first, spinning out of control as the ...

Hi there.. I love this.. I think that transitions could be smoother, especially into the last couple of lines. I think that perhaps some more imagery/emotion would be nice, but ...

Hi there. :) Okay.. so for once, I think I'm going to attempt to say something for each one of these. Something I don't think I have ever done before. ...

Hi there- Beautiful photography.. a bit overedited for my tastes, but the black and white suits it, the lighting is gorgeous, and the frame is perfect. I'm not a huge ...