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Hi there- I really liked this.. I think that the vagueness is not bad in this.. a rare occasion. It seems more a moment, more of an emotion that is ...

This was great.. simply stated.. easy to relate to, real. Great piece... the lines could be shortened I think, but otherwise, I think this was perfect. I've been in situations ...

I LOVE THESE. The style is simplistic and absolutely wonderful.. the character expressed in both of these drawings is astounding, and the lines are simple and a bit swooshy , ...

I absolutely love the second picture. The colors are fantastic, and the lines are used in a very interesting way. Great job on that one. The others seemed a little ...

Hi there.. here to review. :) I agree that you should remove the spoiler, and simply rate the entire piece. I would also elaborate on that section.. it's very bluntly ...

Hi there- Nice piece you have here.. I think that the emotional connection with the reader could be strengthened a bit.. perhaps more background or description of the people in ...

So this was just an outpouring of thought.. stream of consciousness writing type of thing, which I've never done before. Unfortunately, all of my indents disappeared. :c The rain came ...

This was inspired by another piece that was up here at one point, called "We All Are Birds". Just the title.. the rest was a random outpouring of thought. We ...

I don't think that there's a huge need for flow in this piece.. I think it was perfectly done for what it is. The day by day concept is interesting ...

Personally, I think that this was done well.... I'm not a huge fan of rhyming, but it wasn't awful in this. You had some subtle rhymes, which work. The tone ...

Honestly, the rhyming scheme came off as kind of sing-songy to me. Which irks me. Quite a bit. But at least it was consistent. You seem to spend more time ...

Hi- beautiful piece you have there. Unique phrasing and gorgeous imagery.. I would have liked to known more about the situation itself though, as another reviewer mentioned. I definitely found ...

Hi there- I liked that you changed perspective.. I would have like more in-depth characters though, and a bit more subtle descriptions. The ones you had were pretty blunt, and ...

Hi there.. So interesting piece.. I understand what type of thing you were going for.. simple, concise, in short, well short. :) However, there isn't enough. It needs to be ...

Hi there... I get this feeling altogether too often. And it was wonderfully described here.. it was great how you started with the emotion, and then described where it was ...