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  • Other Poetry Re: Rest in peace

    I'm so sorry. :c I actually had a dog named Max when I was little.. I remember when he died, I was a mess.. a complete, sprawling mess of tears ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Am Afraid

    Hi there- This was a beautiful piece... the repetition made it difficult to read, but when I was able to fully focus on the words, I was pleasantly surprised at ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: No Weeping

    Hi there- So, I thought this had a nice and concise rhyming scheme, but it seemed to dominate the whole piece. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming, especially ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Alice

    I think that this is quite good.. sorry if I critique anything that was intentional for your version of them.. I think that Alice's eyes would look better with darker ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Photo: Literary Landfill

    Hi there :) Great picture! :) I do think that, for my personal tastes, this was just a tad overedited.. the colors are super saturated, which always kind of kills ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flocked Meadow

    Hi there :) So, I liked these.. I would consider playing with the contrast just a tad, and perhaps making them completely black and white, or playing with the saturation. ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Undertows

    Holy sh- uhh, cow. That was crazy good. I usually don't give reviews like this.. I can be quite harsh at times, I'm sorry to say. But that was beautifully ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The True Story of Jack and Jill

    Hi there I THINK that I might go buy a pineapple, and try to tempt some minjas out of hiding. Mostly because I love their name. :) Great story... I ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My pictures

    Hey :) Okay.. so I'm just going to critique this as one thing. The first picture was wonderful... great contrast and lines. Great focus too. The rest would have been ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Diary

    Hi there- Nice piece.. I myself have never been able to enjoy using a diary, so I gave it up, and just write other things instead. However, I know many ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Vysehrad Numba 2

    :D Enjoy.. if you can. :P 1. Cities in the Background 2. Just above the door.. a little overhead. 3. Vysehrad Church.. I don't know its real name. It's my ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anything Really: The Sequel? No! The Prologue!

    So wait.. is he a zombie?

    Aug 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anything Really (blame Nate for THIS title)

    I kind of like.. really love this. And I'm not reading into it. It's a spoof thingy. I am fully aware. And it is an amazing one. :D

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Trip To Vysehrad

    I recently went with a friend to this castle, Vysehrad.. it means Wine Castle. :) It's the smaller of two in my city, but it has some gorgeous views. :) ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Afternoon in July

    So, I hope you don't mind. I'm going to review all of these as one.. more of your style than your pictures. c: I love the photographs of the cat... ...

    Aug 29, 2010


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