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Hi there.. so, this was really beautiful.. wonderful imagery and phrasing you have there. I love haiku sequences. But I loved this more than any others I have read. Gorgeous ...

Hi there.. so, I think this was good. However, I do think it could be even better with some imagery.. metaphors and descriptions, just a bit, not too much. The ...

I too didn't understand how the man found the telemarketer, especially when he would be in a huge office with other people. This might work better with a door-to-door salesman. ...

This was beautifully penned.. it has a natural flow.. I don't mean smooth here, though it was smooth, but I mean.. the flow itself reflected natural rhythms.. I don't know ...

These were beautiful.. it's refreshing to see "beach pictures" that actually have some originality to them. I do kind of wish that they were bigger though. :/ I loved the ...

Great job.. the strokes of your pencil are very well done, especially in the hair. I would consider working on the eye and shading a bit more though.. you have ...

Inspired by the phrase "Let's Be Insane". This was basically a bunch of random stanzas that I threw together to be a poem, haha. Thanks for reading! :) Let’s be ...

Love it. Absolutely love it. The name drew me in. Though this is actually senryu. Aren't I particular? :) Anywho. Awesome piece. Love how you never actually say the word ...

Hi there... Loved this... the humor and imagery in it are great, and it's really concise... really nice job with this piece, haha. Awesome voice too. As Crimsona pointed out, ...

This was another excellent piece.. I don't know how you are able to convey so much vivid emotion in your words, but you do... great word choice and phrasing, again. ...

There are several ways to do it... Personally, I use Photobucket.. you just upload them to there, and then use the IMG code to link it into the post on ...

Hi there.. So, this piece was really interesting. I had to slow down, and take every word in, which doesn't happen to often. So Kudos to you. c: I absolutely ...

There are many things you can do.. Talk a walk Look at photography Read others' poetry, line by line, Read a book This website can help.. OR One thing I've ...

This piece has gorgeous imagery.. however, it was difficult for me to get into it, because in some places, it seemed more about the imagery than the workers. I like ...

Cutting is a tough topic, and a somewhat new one to poetry. This means, that when you write about it, it should be good. Really good. Original. And this is ...