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Ignorance really is bliss. Great piece... I really like the last stanza.. I think I would try to take the depth to another level and perhaps add in some description. ...

I really, really like this piece. It's original and creative, and there's enough imagery to evoke some emotion. It's gently written, but carries a great deal of longing and sadness ...

So.. I have posted this before. Now, I want to revisit it. I want to cut it down. It is long, it is ambiguous, it was an outpouring of visuals ...

So this is old. Like.. really old. This was one of my first attempts at poetry. So, probably about 6 months. Which, compared to the rest of my poems, is ...

Hi there, so.. I always thought that haiku was 5-7-5...perhaps this is an inverted style I haven't heard of? Also, it's technically a senyru, unless it's about nature. Other than ...

Hi there.. so I thought that this was quite good, but could be improved. I'm also with the previous reviewer in that I hope the story doesn't dissolve into a ...

Personally, I think this was very well written.. it's very well balanced, lots of personal details that add a lot to the story without overwhelming it. I love the character ...

Okay.. so this was inspired by the phrase "Tripping over our hearts". I really don't know what to think of this one. Any criticism? Feel free to tear it apart, ...

Hi there. :) Really cute drawings.. I love how you were able to convey their characters so well in these small pictures. :) I think that you could probably fill ...

I love this. This is a great picture.. simple with an obvious focus, brings up emotions quite well and easily, is neat and cleanly taken. Nice framing as well. However, ...

Honestly, I saw the little Excerpt and saw "They aren't very good", or something akin to it, and kind of thought.. Oh no.. well I was going to click on ...

I really liked this.. it seemed.. not quite raw, but real. Really real. :) It seemed genuine and realistic, something that everyone can relate to, even if they haven't been ...

Personally, I liked the repetition.. it seemed to apply to each line, and though I'm not a huge fan of repetition, it seemed to work in this piece. Honestly, I ...

So, I wrote this for a contest on another site.. it was to describe a picture of a bottle, lying in the ocean. Hence the poem about a bottle. In ...

I thought this was a sweetly written piece.. however, there are some things I would recommend changing. I would add in some description, emotionally. This is a pretty bare piece ...