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This was written several months ago, when I was still super new to poetry and whatnot. :) Thanks for reading! You aren’t worthy of My tears Or my pain, Or ...

Hi there- This is a super sweet poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it- however, there were a couple of things that I think could have been changed. Especially towards the beginning, ...

This is what happens when I'm bored. Absolutely nothing. Here goes for flooding the forum. Thanks for reading. :) I looked through the looking glass Hoping to find adventure For ...

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Hi there, so, I think that this piece was good.. however, the topic was quite cliche. With those kinds of topics, you need to go about your writing in an ...

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Hi there, so- This was a beautiful poem... the imagery is gorgeous. However, I couldn't find a meaning behind it. I don't know if it's just me or not. I'm ...

Hi there. and umm.. Wow. I did not expect that towards the beginning of the piece, haha. Nice job on keeping your readers on their toes. I really loved the ...

Hi there :) So.. I thought this was a good piece. However, I too think it could benefit from being broken up into separate stanzas. It can be quite difficult ...

I agree with what a lot of your said.. it's supposed to take eight good comments to balance one discouragement.. so that can be a problem. However, having the community ...

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Hi there.. I'm Coral. :) This was a really good story.. I love how you went from character to character, and made it really clear. You have great description in ...

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