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Hi Melinda! Welcome to the site :) If you have any questions or anything, feel free to send me a Private Message (PM), and I would love to help you ...

This was really good- I think that right after the beginning, perhaps you could work some more. The description stopped me from getting straight into the story. I do wish ...

Hi there :) So- I think that the human was done quite well. You said that the nose gave you some trouble- I can see. Personally, when I'm drawing faces, ...

I absolutely love your use of language- to be perfectly honest, I'm not sure I entirely followed the end, but the rest of the story was excellent. I love your ...

I really liked this piece... the imagery was fantastic, and was filled with emotion. I feel like something was lacking though: perhaps a reason for the defeat? I'm not quite ...

Thanks for reading! Remember that night when we got kicked out of that bar for singing too loudly? We were making people mad with our pretty little love songs. Jealous ...

Get ready for a ridiculously long list. I'll try to edit myself as much as possible. A Perfect Circle (or anything else with Maynard) Mumford and Sons Iron and Wine ...

Hi there.. so, after the last line, I actually said, "That's adorable." No "Aww"ing or anything, because that's just too much, but it was super adorable. :) Nice job. So- ...

I think that this piece is very sweet- it carries a lot of emotion, a lot of hope, and even more nostalgia. I would think about perhaps adding in some ...

Hi there, While prologues set the scene for the book, and help create the world and situation, it is not a place for an information dump. This prologue was kind ...

This needs a lot of work... I hadn't been planning on a second installment (or any more, for that matter, I'm going to have to continue more). Thanks for reading ...

Hi there.. so I would agree with your that this needs some work. Personally, in a lot of ways, this seemed more of a rant than a poem. There wasn't ...

Hi there... so personally, I think that with a topic like this, it could have turned out badly. I have heard the phrase "love like a flowing river" several times ...

Hi there, This poem was beautiful.. I loved the twist from the opening lines. I started reading it, the first line, and inwardly went "Really?" and then continued on, and ...

Haha, I really like this.. an anticlimax of sorts, and excellently penned one. I especially love the part about donuts. I am quite fond of donuts. Anywho. Great voice throughout ...