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Hi! Welcome to the site! That's awesome that you're from Iceland... I live in Prague, and go to an international school, so I've met people from all over the world- ...

I think that this was done well- I would think about perhaps expressing more horror in the beginning, making it seem more personal instead of a textbook description. Don't just ...

Okay- so I'm Coral. And I've been on here for a while. But I missed out on writing my little "Welcome Mat" piece. And, feeling as if I'd been deprived ...

I think that this was good- I would try to stay away from cliche images, and keep the tone though. Also, run this through spellcheck. I would focus on some ...

Hi there- so I thought this was really good, a nice opening to a story. I do think that perhaps you could change some things. First- remember to always keep ...

Hi there- I can't say that I'm much of a fan when it comes to Twilight, but I grew up on Buffy. :) Always loved vampires and werewolves... dragons too. ...

Welcome to the site! :) Hi. I know what you mean... I've been writing since I was eight, and refused to show anything to anyone ever until last year. Took ...

Hi- this is pretty good. I really like the idea behind it. I would think about pronouncing the wrist more though, especially at the top of it. The bone in ...

This was a beautiful piece- I didn't understand it completely, and it may have just been my inability to read further into poetry. Anywho- you used gorgeous phrasing, and a ...

Hi there- So, I thought this was good- great imagery and descriptions. However, I found it a bit repetitive. It seemed to describe growing old very well, but seemed bland ...

This was excellent! I was reading, reading, reading, and then came to the word "merpeople" and immediately stopped. Winced. And then continued. And it wasn't what I expected at all. ...

This is pretty cool. :) I love how the lighting on your hands and face only help make it look more real. I would consider filling in some spots that ...

So I went to the zoo. Not always my favorite activity, as I find it somewhat depressing, but the Prague Zoo is awesome... lots of animals without cages, but rather ...

Personally, I understood all of this, which seems contrary to the person above me. I followed you throughout the entire thing- clear diction. I thought this was great... I agree ...

This is definitely a stylized type of drawing, but I really like it. You have a great sense with textures and patterns, and it shows. Obviously, they aren't realistic, but ...