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This was excellent- I loved the rhyme scheme and the theme. (see what I did there? :P ) Anywho- I thought that, while this was smooth, the rhythm was off. ...

I like this piece- it has a simple message, and a nice little rhyme scheme to go with it. I would think about taking it to another deeper level, and ...

Hi there ^_^ Welcome to the site! Yeah- I've tried several sites, and this is one my favorites. Everyone is pretty supportive and honest. Hope you enjoy using it. :) ...

I think this was a great piece- I would think about taking out the text, as I think text in photos kind of detracts from its beauty/originality, but otherwise, this ...

Welcome to the site! Hope you enjoy it here- it's quite a remarkable place. :) This was a great piece. :) You used the emotion very well, and I love ...

This was a fantastic piece- probably one of the best I've read on the site. I would consider, though, making the transition from talking to "you" (meaning Susie) to talking ...

Random little scene again. :) No read through- four minute write. Thanks for reading!! I set my crumpled napkin on my plate, next to the meal I had picked apart. ...

This was a great piece- I loved the contrast of the subject and the description. Great concept. :) I loved the imagery and the way you incorporated yourself into the ...

This was very nicely done. I would try concentrating on the woman's fear, and perhaps try developing more a personality for the devil. Will he be pure evil? As sadistic ...

I love your command of language and word choice. It really does make for a remarkable poem. This was another great piece- the ending seemed a bit abrupt to me, ...

I don't really know what this was. I saw some phrase about living shadows, and out came this. It's odd, I know. 2 minute write. Thanks for reading/reviewing! :D our ...

Nice piece you have here- I do think that there are perhaps some changes that could be made though. There were some unrealistic parts in this- the transition from being ...

I liked this piece... the concept itself was interesting and quite originally done. The voice was very different from most other things I've read. I would consider incorporating more emotion ...

This was a wonderful piece.... I love the ending. I would work on making the dialog a bit more natural, but other than that, I think this was fantastic. You ...

I really like it- I would consider possibly turning up the contrast just a wee bit, barely a touch, and I think it would add a lot to the picture. ...