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Re: ...
Holy fu-cow. That was somewhat brilliant. Each description was perfectly thought out, and set the scene perfectly, a scene that we may have thought of before, but never with such ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Picking At My Nail Polish
For a first try, this was really good. :) As you go into poetry-land (if you should decide to continue on that crooked path), you can start adding in some ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Hello, my name is.
Hi there :) So I just wanted to say- I thought this was really good. I think that every girl could relate to this piece in some way, and draw ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Sunburns
A weird metaphor. Thanks for reading! :) We sat in sunburns caring not about the sting climbing its way across our skin, cause it was being healed, or numbed, rather ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: It begins with a pencil and white paper.
Okay- I'm just going to start out by saying that these are a whole lot better than anything I could ever draw. Now that that's out the way, I'll give ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Wedding in a Park
This was an absolutely excellent piece- I love how you are able to convey so much imagery all at once. You are so concise- it's making me jealous :) Wonderful ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The Wisdom of Mr Fox
Great piece- it really does remind me of Walt Whitman's work. :) The ending was superb, original and ironic in more ways than one. Really excellent write- I wasn't sure ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Lightheaded Love
This is a really rough draft, and I wrote it on two separate occasions, so it might be a little bit choppy. My stomach gnawed at the rest of my ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: French Lessons
This was extremely original, and had a completely different style than I'm used to. I adore it. No background is needed in any poetry, as well as you define the ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Mouth (Black and White/Macro)
Love this photo! Even more than I thought I would before. :) It's really simple, but the black and white works perfectly to highlight your points of interest, and the ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Pretty Random Photography.
Hi there :D These were pretty great- the first one was definitely my favorite. I really like the filter/color settings you have on these, but I would think about playing ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Mouth (Black and White/Macro)
I would recommend resizing this. Here's a link. As it is now, the quality has been destroyed by its being blown up, and I can't see it all at once. ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
I thought this was wonderful- you kept on switching who you were addressing it to, and the genders were a bit confusing at one point, but otherwise, this was human ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: -deleted-
This was an excellent chapter- the only thing I found was "psychic" was supposed to be "physique". Other than that, I think you have a very well balanced piece. I ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: B&W Chess pieces
The first picture is wonderful. It has some element of mystery of it, and offers a different perspective for the pieces- more personal. Wonderfully done. I like the lighting, and ...
Sep 19, 2010
